Mags Storey's If Only You Knew has some worthwhile features; let's look at them.
Readability. Especially for the first half or so, it moves swiftly and easily. I admit that I started bogging down about a quarter of the way through, for reasons I'll explain tomorrow. But I tend to be unusual in such respects. Most readers probably will have no problems.
Humor. The main character is a klutz, and some of the others are also (from their own standpoints) unintentionally funny at times. The teen angst undercuts this a bit, especially toward the end, and it's hard to balance suspense and humor effectively. Still, there are funny bits throughout, and as usual, they make the more fraught moments bearable.
Characters. Mixed bag: granted their existence as defined, their actions are generally believable. That's good, because this is essentially character driven.
Ending. The ending is reasonably strong--there's a loose end with an obvious resolution, but that's fairly trivial. More important, there is a good message at the end.
Next time I'll look at some problem areas and present a conclusion.
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1 year ago